What is "resume English," and where should I use it?

To save space for quantitative data (#, $, %) and qualitative details (first, youngest, only, best), I encourage you to use "résumé English" in your resume and application data form short answers. 

What is "résumé English" and how do I use it?

• Remove articles 'a', 'an', and 'the'
• Delete all subjects 'I' and personal pronouns (we, they, etc.)
• Cut helping verbs ('is,' 'was,' 'were')
• Use verb tenses in the past, except for your present job. Example: Conducted routine inspections of on-site equipment
• Remove periods (.) since you are not writing proper English sentences
For applications forms: If you have enough characters to add a period at the end of every short answer, then I suggest that you do so. On the other hand, if you don't have space in some places to include a period, then I encourage you to omit them everywhere
• Remember to use power verbs

HOW TO WRITE NUMBERS IN RESUMES AND CVs

• Change all number words (five) to numerals (5)
• In essays, write numbers as words if below 10 (except $ or %)
• In resumes and application data forms, however, you can ignore this "rule" in order to save space that is better used for impressive details that show quantifiable results ($, %) and qualitative impact (first, youngest, only, best)

HOW TO WRITE MONETARY ABBREVIATIONS IN RESUMES AND CVs

Thanks to my AIGAC colleague Laura Freedman, who shared some great advice regarding numerical abbreviations in resumes.

How to use abbreviated numbers in resumes for international MBA programs and companies

PREFERRED BY INSEAD (and understood / acceptable at any top MBA program)
(from the CV self-review style guide INSEAD gives to incoming students)

Suggested numerical abbreviations:

• k for 1,000 (thousands)
• mn for 1,000,000 (millions)
• bn for 1,000,000,000 (billions)
• tn for 1,000,000,000,000 (trillions)

For Indians – avoid lakh and crore. For Japanese – avoid "man" (万). These terms suggest you're going to have difficulty adapting to an international corporate environment.

For currencies - we use currency code, but for major dollar denominations, we prefer US$ and SG$, CN$, AU$, and NZ$. The $ next to the number makes it easier to distinguish the currency from the number and is a symbol most people recognize, e.g., US$30k vs. USD30k, or CN$60mn vs. CAD60mn. Note that a common error is USD$ - either D or $ is fine but using both is not.

For other currencies, I prefer £ and € to EUR and GBP for readability. € is unique to Euro, and £ is dominant enough that nobody is going to mistake the currency for e.g. Cypriot pounds (unless you are from or worked in Cyprus, in which case it's best to use GBP for clarity).

As a general rule, convert currency amounts to US$, since it's a universally understood international currency. It's also OK to use the currency for the market you are targeting, recognizing that that signals you want to be in that market. Best to avoid other currencies. Most prospective employers (or B-schools) are not going to understand PEN40mn (Peruvian Nuevo Sol), or DZD246mn (Algerian Dinar), for example.

More tips on how to write numerals here

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How can I proofread and edit my writing?

First, I encourage you to use this three-step proofreading method.

SPELL CHECK for careless mistakes: First, please use the free spell and grammar check programs offered by MS Word and/or Google Docs.

READ ALOUD to check your grammar and style: Next, read your essay draft aloud at full volume to catch awkward phrasings and words that you are using too frequently.

READ BACKWARDS to check your logic: After taking a short break (get away from your computer!), read your essay "backward". Start with your final sentence and work back to your first. Are you making any logical leaps? How are your transitions?

More Proofreading Strategies to Try

Skim your paper, pausing at the words "and" and "or." Check on each side of these words to see whether the items joined are parallel. If not, make them parallel.
If you have several items in a list, put them in a column to see if they are parallel.
Listen to the sound of the items in a list of the items being compared. Do you hear the same kinds of sounds? For example, is there a series of "-ing" words beginning each item? Or do you hear a rhythm being repeated? If something is breaking that rhythm or repetition of sound, check to see if it needs to be made parallel.

How To Edit Your Own Writing (Self-Editing)

Editing takes considerable patience. I list below some reasonable ideas for each edit cycle. The sequence that you execute these steps may impact the style you produce; experiment a bit to see what order works best for your writing. You will know you are done editing when you are positively sick and tired of reading your work again.

A. Dictionary Check

Go through your document and look up in a dictionary any words where you aren't 101 percent sure of their meaning. I've surprised myself a couple of times when I have used a word repeatedly only to look it up and find it has another meaning entirely.

B. Action and Active Voice

Your writing will be clearer if you structure your sentences as subject-verb-object; tell action rather than describing situations. Use your word processor to search for words ending in "-ed" -- if you preceded this word by "is" or "was" (or similar verbs) the phrase would be better rewritten. Also, check for the word "there" followed by "is" or "are" (or similar verbs).

D. Be Positive

Occasionally the word "not" is useful for emphasis. Most of the time though a sentence is stronger when positive; use your word processor to search for the word "not" and recast the sentence using other descriptives.

E. Drown Your Darlings

If something sticks in your mind as being "ever so clever" you probably should remove it.

F. Re-order Your Words and Sentences

Keep related words together -- adjectives next to their nouns.


MY ESSAY IS STILL TOO LONG! HOW DO I CUT WORDS?
Read your essay aloud at full volume (doing so forces you to go slow).
After each word or phrase, ask yourself, "If I cut this, will my meaning change?"
If the answer is "no", then cut it!

More tips here, including this activity from the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL), which is a fantastic resource for writers.

This resource will help you write clearly by eliminating unnecessary words and rearranging your phrases.

The goal of concise writing is to use the most effective words. Concise writing does not always have the fewest words, but it always uses the strongest ones. Writers often fill sentences with weak or unnecessary words that can be deleted or replaced. Words and phrases should be deliberately chosen for the work they are doing. Like bad employees, words that don't accomplish enough should be fired. When only the most effective words remain, writing will be far more concise and readable.

This resource contains general conciseness tips followed by very specific strategies for pruning sentences.
1. Replace several vague words with more powerful and specific words.
Often, writers use several small and ambiguous words to express a concept, wasting energy expressing ideas better relayed through fewer specific words. As a general rule, more specific words lead to more concise writing. Because of the variety of nouns, verbs, and adjectives, most things have a closely corresponding description. Brainstorming or searching a thesaurus can lead to the word best suited for a specific instance. Notice that the examples below actually convey more as they drop in the word count.

Wordy: The politician talked about several of the merits of after-school programs in his speech (14 words)
Concise: The politician touted after-school programs in his speech. (8 words)

Wordy: Suzie believed but could not confirm that Billy had feelings of affection for her. (14 words)
Concise: Suzie assumed that Billy adored her. (6 words)

Wordy: Our website has made available many of the things you can use for making a decision on the best dentist. (20 words)
Concise: Our website presents criteria for determining the best dentist. (9 words)

Wordy: Working as a pupil under someone who develops photos was an experience that really helped me learn a lot. (20 words)
Concise: Working as a photo technician's apprentice was an educational experience. (10 words)

2. Interrogate every word in a sentence
Check every word to make sure that it is providing something important and unique to a sentence. If words are dead weight, they can be deleted or replaced. Other sections in this handout cover this concept more specifically, but there are some general examples below containing sentences with words that could be cut.

Wordy: The teacher demonstrated some of the various ways and methods for cutting words from my essay that I had written for class. (22 words)
Concise: The teacher demonstrated methods for cutting words from my essay. (10 words)

Wordy: Eric Clapton and Steve Winwood formed a new band of musicians together in 1969, giving it the ironic name of Blind Faith because early speculation that was spreading everywhere about the band suggested that the new musical group would be good enough to rival the earlier bands that both men had been in, Cream and Traffic, which people had really liked and had been very popular. (66 words)
Concise: Eric Clapton and Steve Winwood formed a new band in 1969, ironically naming it Blind Faith because speculation suggested that the group would rival the musicians’ previous popular bands, Cream, and Traffic. (32 words)

Wordy: Many have made the wise observation that when a stone is in motion rolling down a hill or incline that that moving stone is not as likely to be covered all over with the kind of thick green moss that grows on stationary unmoving things and becomes a nuisance and suggests that those things haven’t moved in a long time and probably won’t move any time soon. (67 words)
Concise: A rolling stone gathers no moss. (6 words)

3. Combine Sentences.
Some information does not require a full sentence, and can easily be inserted into another sentence without losing any of its value. To get more strategies for sentence combining, see the handout on Sentence Variety.

Wordy: Ludwig's castles are an astounding marriage of beauty and madness. By his death, he had commissioned three castles. (18 words)
Concise: Ludwig's three castles are an astounding marriage of beauty and madness. (11 words)

Wordy: The supposed crash of a UFO in Roswell, New Mexico aroused interest in extraterrestrial life. This crash is rumored to have occurred in 1947. (24 words)
Concise: The supposed 1947 crash of a UFO in Roswell, New Mexico aroused interest in extraterrestrial life. (16 words)

(found at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/572/01/; accessed 11/2010)

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When should I capitalize a word?

Q: WHEN DO I CAPITALIZE A WORD?
Capitalize:
The first word of a sentence.
The first word of a quotation. [He said, "Let's do it."]
Exception: If a quotation is less than a sentence, don't capitalize the first word. [He said it was "wonderful."]
The word "I."
Proper names and abbreviations of proper names. [S.D. Tripp]
Proper names used as adjectives. [the Fourier transform]
Geographical names and names of political units. [Asia, Fukushima]
Compass directions only when they are parts of names. [North Korea]
Names of streets, buildings, parks, and companies. [Broadway, the Empire State Building, Central Park, Sony]
Names of organizations and religions. [the Republican Party, Buddhism]
Names of races and nationalities. [Caucasian, Japanese]
The names of wars, battles, historical events, and historical periods. [World War II, the Battle of the Coral Sea, the Meiji Restoration, the Tokugawa Period]
The names of prizes, treaties, and famous documents. [the Nobel Prize, the Declaration of Independence]
Military and civilian titles. [General MacArthur, Prime Minister Hashimoto]
Academic degrees. [John Smith, Ph.D.]


Q: Should I capitalize the title of my paper?
A: You should capitalize only the first word of the title.

Write your title like this: Emergency information terminal using energy harvesting technology

Not this: Emergency Information Terminal Using Energy Harvesting Technology


Q: Should I capitalize masters degree?
A: The answer depends on context.

If you are writing a sentence in which you mention a bachelor's degree or a master's degree or even a doctor's degree, do not capitalize------but always remember to use the apostrophe! (See http://www.cmu.edu/styleguide/capitalization.htmle.)

If you are writing a person's name and including degree(s) earned, capitalize the abbreviations as you've always seen them: Lynne Hancock, L.P.N., R.N., B.S.N., M.S.N or Lynda Eggleston, B.A., M.A., Ph.D. (Ordinarily it is not necessary to list all earned if they were successive. In other words, anyone holding a Ph.D. would hold a bachelor's and a master's, so Ph.D. is sufficient. If however you have someone with several fields of study, you'd want to indicate the highest degree earned within each field.)

If you are writing your own resume, use capitalized abbreviations:
EDUCATION
M.S. Zoology, 2006

These are the most often used contexts, but if your context is different from those mentioned above, just submit the question again with the context defined.

Capitalization of Academic Degrees
Perhaps you’ve wondered if and when academic degrees (bachelor’s, master’s, etc.) should be capitalized.
The Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS) recommends writing academic degrees in lower case except when directly preceding or following a name.
Examples:
Orlando is pursuing a bachelor of science in civil engineering.
He introduced Jennifer Miller, Master of Fine Arts.
He introduced Master of Fine Arts Jennifer Miller.
The Associated Press Stylebook (AP) recommends no capitals when referring to degrees in general terms (bachelor’s, master’s, doctorate, associate degree) but always capitalizing specific degrees (Bachelor of Arts, Master of Science), whether or not they directly precede or follow a name.
Examples:
Orlando is thinking about getting a Bachelor of Science degree.
Orlando is thinking about getting a master’s degree.
He introduced Orlando Cruz, Bachelor of Science.


I recommend you pick your resource and then be consistent.

Abbreviations of academic degrees are to be capitalized. CMOS recommends omitting periods unless required for tradition or consistency (BA, BS, MA, MS, PhD), but AP prefers retaining the periods (B.A., B.S., M.A., M.S., Ph.D.).

When should I use acronyms (abbreviated words)?

In general, I encourage my clients to avoid acronyms whenever possible. Unless you need to use an acronym to save words, and unless you use the acronym more than once in your essay or resume, I suggest you spell everything out.

Busy admissions officers readers don't want to have to remember unfamiliar acronyms (abbreviated words). Keeping track of your arcane acronyms slows them down. Make it easier, not harder, for them to admit you. That said, when you must use an acronym multiple times in the same essay, please follow these general guidelines:

Q: HOW AND WHEN DO I USE ABBREVIATED WORDS?
A: Typically, an abbreviation is spelled out at its first instance in an article, followed by the abbreviated form within parentheses; in subsequent instances, only the abbreviation is used. However, this is not compulsory for terms that may be familiar to the intended readers.

CORRECT
As my long-term goal, I plan to become the CEO of my company.
(CEO is a well-known, universal acronym, so you do not need to spell it out the first time)

INCORRECT
I work as an engineer for NTT. NTT is Japan's leading telecommunications company.

INCORRECT
I work as an engineer for Nippon Telegraph and Telephone Corporation ("NTT"). NTT is Japan's leading telecommunications company.
(You don't need to put an acronym in quotes " ".)


CORRECT
I work as an engineer for Nippon Telegraph and Telephone Corporation (NTT). NTT is Japan's leading telecommunications company.
Q: SHOULD I USE ACRONYMS IN ADMISSIONS ESSAYS?
A: Please avoid acronyms. While they are effective in technical reports and internal communications for fellow practitioners, they have no place in admissions essays. Instead, use this opportunity to prove your ability to explain complex, technical information in a way that readers (and future classmates) can understand.

Should I use an indefinite article (a/an) or a definite article (the)?

ARTICLES



What is an article?
· Basically, an article is an adjective. Like adjectives, articles modify nouns.


English has two articles: the and a/an.

the = definite article used to refer to specific or particular nouns

a/an = indefinite article used to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns

"A/an" is used to refer to a non-specific or non-particular member of the group 

For example, if I say, "Let's read the book," I mean a specific book. If I say, "Let's read a book," I mean any book (a non-particular book) rather than a specific book.


Omission of Articles
Not all nouns need articles. Some common types of nouns that don't take an article are:
Names of languages and nationalities: Chinese, English, Spanish, Russian (unless you are referring to the population of the nation in general: "The Spanish are known for their warm hospitality.")
Names of academic subjects: mathematics, biology, history, computer science
Exercise
· Find and circle all of the articles in your paper.
· Can you tell which nouns require definite and indefinite articles, and which require no article at all?

Homework – Find and fix any mistakes in your use of articles.



In addition to MS Word spell check, you might try Vince's "Google that stuff" (GTS) method.
1. Put your article phrase in quotation marks and search Google (.com English version, not co.jp).
· Example: "the veracity of a theory" (I could not find any instances of "a veracity of a theory." Therefore, this phrase always uses the definitive article ("the")
2. If professionally edited sites (not personal blogs) use the phrase as you have written it, then your articles are probably correct.
3. On the other hand, if you only find a few examples, or none at all, then you should probably use a different article, or none at all.


Try Vince's GTS method with the following phrases:
Can you find any indefinite article phrases for the following? (I could not.)
· "The Data Encryption Standard"
· "the Earth's crust"
· "the opposite polarity"
· "the power of reasoning"
· "the Secure Sockets Layer"
· "the theory of relativity"


I found instances of both definite and indefinite articles for the following phrases:
· "a carbon footprint" and "the carbon footprint" (e.g. of The carbon footprint an iPhone)
· "a symbiotic relationship” and. "the symbiotic relationship" (e.g. The symbiotic relationship between humans and domesticated animals)
· "an outlier from the data" and "the outlier from the data" (e.g. How does removing the outlier from the data affect the mean and the median?)


Vince's final observation: I believe the process of learning English articles is somewhat similar to the process of learning Japanese counter words (josūshi 助数詞), which are used along with numbers to count things, actions, and events. Someone learning Japanese simply needs to memorize the proper use of these unique grammatical structures. Perhaps English articles are similar in this regard. Therefore, if you read (and write) English every day, you will eventually develop instincts to differentiate definite and indefinite articles.


Even writers who grew up in English-speaking countries struggle with articles.


Here are some tips from the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL), which is a fantastic resource.

Using Articles

Summary: This handout discusses the differences between indefinite articles (a/an) and definite articles (the).

Contributors: Paul Lynch, Allen Brizee, Elizabeth Angeli
Last Edited: 2011-03-03 10:04:28

What is an article? Basically, an article is an adjective. Like adjectives, articles modify nouns.

English has two articles: the and a/an. The is used to refer to specific or particular nouns; a/an is used to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns. We call the the definite article and a/an the indefinite article.
the = definite article
a/an = indefinite article

For example, if I say, "Let's read the book," I mean a specific book. If I say, "Let's read a book," I mean any book rather than a specific book.

Here's another way to explain it: The is used to refer to a specific or particular member of a group. For example, "I just saw the most popular movie of the year." There are many movies, but only one particular movie is the most popular. Therefore, we use the.

"A/an" is used to refer to a non-specific or non-particular member of the group.
For example, "I would like to go see a movie." Here, we're not talking about a specific movie. We're talking about any movie. There are many movies, and I want to see any movie. I don't have a specific one in mind.
Let's look at each kind of article a little more closely.

Indefinite Articles: a and an
"A" and "an" signal that the noun modified is indefinite, referring to any member of a group. For example:
"My daughter really wants a dog for Christmas." This refers to any dog. We don't know which dog because we haven't found the dog yet.
"Somebody call a policeman!" This refers to any policeman. We don't need a specific policeman; we need any policeman who is available.
"When I was at the zoo, I saw an elephant!" Here, we're talking about a single, non-specific thing, in this case an elephant. There are probably several elephants at the zoo, but there's only one we're talking about here.

Remember, using a or an depends on the sound that begins the next word. So...
a + singular noun beginning with a consonant: a boy; a car; a bike; a zoo; a dog
an + singular noun beginning with a vowel: an elephant; an egg; an apple; an idiot; an orphan
a + singular noun beginning with a consonant sound: a user (sounds like 'yoo-zer,' i.e. begins with a consonant 'y' sound, so 'a' is used); a university; a unicycle
an + nouns starting with silent "h": an hour
a + nouns starting with a pronounced "h": a horse


In some cases where "h" is pronounced, such as "historical," you can use an. However, a is more commonly used and preferred.
A historical event is worth recording.

Remember that these rules also apply when you use acronyms:

Introductory Composition at Purdue (ICaP) handles first-year writing at the University. Therefore, an ICaP memo generally discusses issues concerning English 106 instructors.

Another case where this rule applies is when acronyms start with consonant letters but have vowel sounds:

An MSDS (material safety data sheet) was used to record the data. An SPCC plan (Spill Prevention Control and Countermeasures plan) will help us prepare for the worst.

If the noun is modified by an adjective, the choice between a and an depends on the initial sound of the adjective that immediately follows the article:
a broken egg
an unusual problem
a European country (sounds like 'yer-o-pi-an,' i.e. begins with consonant 'y' sound)
Remember, too, that in English, the indefinite articles are used to indicate membership in a group:
I am a teacher. (I am a member of a large group known as teachers.)
Brian is an Irishman. (Brian is a member of the people known as Irish.)
Seiko is a practicing Buddhist. (Seiko is a member of the group of people known as Buddhists.)

Definite Article: the
The definite article is used before singular and plural nouns when the noun is specific or particular. The signals that the noun is definite, that it refers to a particular member of a group.

For example:
"The dog that bit me ran away." Here, we're talking about a specific dog, the dog that bit me.
"I was happy to see the policeman who saved my cat!" Here, we're talking about a particular policeman. Even if we don't know the policeman's name, it's still a particular policeman because it is the one who saved the cat.
"I saw the elephant at the zoo." Here, we're talking about a specific noun. Probably there is only one elephant at the zoo.

Count and Noncount Nouns
The can be used with noncount nouns, or the article can be omitted entirely.
"I love to sail over the water" (some specific body of water) or "I love to sail over water" (any water).
"He spilled the milk all over the floor" (some specific milk, perhaps the milk you bought earlier that day) or "He spilled milk all over the floor" (any milk).

"A/an" can be used only with count nouns.
"I need a bottle of water."
"I need a new glass of milk."

Most of the time, you can't say, "She wants a water," unless you're implying, say, a bottle of water.
Geographical use of the
There are some specific rules for using the with geographical nouns.
Do not use the before:
names of most countries/territories: Italy, Mexico, Bolivia; however, thethe Dominican Republic, the Philippines, the United States Netherlands,
names of cities, towns, or states: Seoul, Manitoba, Miami
names of streets: Washington Blvd., Main St.
names of lakes and bays: Lake Titicaca, Lake Erie except with a group of lakes like the Great Lakes
names of mountains: Mount Everest, Mount Fuji except with ranges of mountains like the Andes or the Rockies or unusual names like the Matterhorn
names of continents (Asia, Europe)
names of islands (Easter Island, Maui, Key West) except with island chains like the Aleutians, the Hebrides, or the Canary Islands

Do use the before:
names of rivers, oceans and seas: the Nile, the Pacific
points on the globe: the Equator, the North Pole
geographical areas: the Middle East, the West
deserts, forests, gulfs, and peninsulas: the Sahara, the Persian Gulf, the Black Forest, the Iberian Peninsula
Omission of Articles
Some common types of nouns that don't take an article are:
Names of languages and nationalities: Chinese, English, Spanish, Russian (unless you are referring to the population of the nation: "The Spanish are known for their warm hospitality.")

Names of sports: volleyball, hockey, baseball
Names of academic subjects: mathematics, biology, history, computer science


(found at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/540/01; accessed 2011/06)

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"A" PHRASES FOR ENGINEERS and SCIENTISTS

1. a bell curve
2. a blatant error
3. a bold conjecture
4. a brilliant metamorphosis
5. a carbon footprint
6. a cell membrane
7. a confirmatory test
8. a controlled trial
9. a cost-benefit analysis
10. a cryptogram
11. a falsifiable hypothesis
12. a falsification of the facts
13. a favorable variation
14. a fear of contagion
15. a gene mutation
16. a generalized infection
17. a genotype
18. a human embryo
19. a life science ombudsman
20. a life-giving elixir
21. a light receptor
22. a major category
23. a major premise
24. a mechanical contrivance
25. a memory module
26. a negative connotation
27. a negative externality
28. a neurodegenerative disorder
29. a neurophysiological change
30. a paradoxical truth
31. a particle trajectory
32. a perceptible distinction
33. a perennial problem
34. a performance metric
35. a phenotype
36. a physical examination
37. a physiotherapist
38. a plurality of users
39. a practitioner of naturopathy
40. a precipitous decline
41. a prime locus
42. a prominent microbiologist
43. a psychoactive drug
44. a refined experiment
45. a regression into infancy
46. a replication of an experiment
47. a reserve of oil
48. a reciprocal relationship
49. a retrovirus
50. a scientific milestone
51. a scientific article
52. a self-regulating system
53. a sentient being
54. a separate cell
55. a separate entity
56. a skin irritation study
57. a somatic cell
58. a state of disequilibrium
59. a state of flux
60. a supernormal range of vision
61. a symbiotic relationship
62. a systematizer of data
63. a theoretical construct
64. a theoretical discipline
65. a therapeutic process
66. a transfer protocol
67. a transitional fossil
68. a transmutation from A to B
69. a transposition cipher
70. a traumatic procedure
71. a vital clue
72. a water-related epidemic
73. a wiring fault
74. a world-class geophysicist
75. a zero-emission vehicle


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"AN" PHRASES FOR ENGINEERS & SCIENTISTS

1. an aberration
2. an able exponent of science
3. an ad hoc explanation
4. an adaptive advantage
5. an add-on device
6. an adult cell
7. an adverse effect
8. an allele
9. an allergen
10. an allopathic doctor
11. an analgesic
12. an anesthetic
13. an aquatic arthropod
14. an area of contention
15. an astrophysicist
16. an elective subject
17. an electron
18. an elementary particle
19. an embryonic stem cell
20. an eminent publicist
21. an empathy with animals
22. an endemic disease
23. an ethical transgression
24. an imaging experiment
25. an impending disaster
26. an impossible dilemma
27. an indigenous species
28. an influential preceptor
29. an ingenious experiment
30. an inner cell mass
31. an insidious disease
32. an insuperable obstacle
33. an interceptor
34. an intermediate stage
35. an optimally-controlled motor
36. an oral vaccine
37. an organ transplant
38. an ornithologist
39. an outlier from the data
40. an underlying reason



"THE" PHRASES FOR ENGINEERS & SCIENTISTS

1. the ability to reproduce
2. the acuity of vision
3. the age of puberty
4. the Arctic rim of Alaska
5. the causal nexus
6. the climate jigsaw
7. the cranium of a cat
8. the Data Encryption Standard
9. the Earth's crust
10. the eaves of a house
11. the efficacy of a treatment
12. the equivalent of a command
13. the evidence of plagiarism
14. the genetics behind cancer
15. the history of cryptography
16. the imperative of justice
17. the impoverishment of Africa
18. the incidence of catastrophes
19. the integrity of science
20. the lexical cohesion
21. the lexicon of medicine
22. the lore of herbal medicine
23. the minutiae
24. the movement of a photon
25. the Neolithic era
26. the neuroscience of dementia
27. the offspring of a hybrid
28. the only method conceivable
29. the opposite polarity
30. the power of reasoning
31. the Secure Sockets Layer
32. the theory of relativity
33. the transcription of a gene
34. the uniformity of nature
35. the veracity of a theory

Common spelling and grammar errors (not picked up by spell checkers)

Here are some of the most common spelling and grammar errors that are not detectable by spellcheckers.

These are words which, though misspelled, are actually correct spellings for the wrong word: "I go to work on Monday threw to Friday."

Please write well!

HOW TO PROOFREAD 

First, I encourage you to use this three-step proofreading method.

1. SPELL CHECK
for careless mistakes
Please use the free spell and grammar check programs offered by MS Word and/or Google Docs.


2. READ ALOUD
to check your grammar and style

Here is the best way I know to avoid Vince's Dirty Dozen.
Read your essay slowly and at full volume to catch awkward phrasings and words that you are using too frequently.
Then, record yourself reading your essays and listen to the recording.
Often, your speaking and listening skills are better than your writing skills. Therefore, hearing your voice through an external device helps you catch mistakes and notice areas for improvement.

3. READ BACKWARDS
to check your logic

After taking a short break, read your essay in reverse order (sentence-by-sentence, not word-by-word).
Start with your final sentence and work back to your first.
Are you making any logical leaps?
Are your transitions clear?

But wait. You are still not done! Before submitting your final paper, be sure to check for the following common errors that are not picked up by spell checkers.


COMMON ERRORS NOT PICKED UP BY SPELL CHECKERS

The list below shows a number of common errors. It's worth a quick read-through to ensure that you have not made any of these mistakes. If you are doubtful about a particular word or phrase in your essay, use the 'Find in page' option on your browser to see if it appears here.

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design, and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

The following words are spelled correctly, but they are incorrectly used in most essays. Spell check will not catch them. Therefore, you need to read your essays aloud. If you want to be extra sure, record yourself reading your essays, then listen for awkward phrases and wordy passages.

affect/effect

• In most cases, 'affect' is the verb and 'effect' the noun.
• "If I don't complete my assignment, it could affect my degree mark."
• "I banged the door as hard as I could, but it had no effect." However, 'effect' can be used as a verb in certain cases, meaning 'to bring to pass': "I wanted to talk to her to effect a reconciliation."

border/boarder

• Use "border" when discussing boundaries and edges, as in Doctors Without Borders, border guard, and cross-border M&A
• "Boarders" refers to residents in a boarding house or school paying for their room and board (food), or people who ride snowboards A 'boarder' is someone who 'boards' - a lodger.
• A 'border' is a barrier surrounding an area; either a fence or sometimes simply a notional line, as in borders between countries. It is also used in computers to indicate the edge of an object - the borders of a page, for instance.

career/carrier

• You mean "career"; a "carrier" refers to a person or thing that carries, holds, or conveys something

criteria/criterion

• 'Criterion' is the singular, 'criteria' the plural.
• "He seems to have met all the criteria."
• "We must look closely at this criterion." 

hole/whole

• A 'hole' is something you get in your sock (or roof, or whatever).
• 'Whole' means a complete entity, rather than just a part:
• "The shoes looked good, but it was a different matter if you considered the whole outfit."

its/it's

• 'it's' (with the apostrophe) is always short for 'it is':
• "It's a good job we didn't go out in this weather." 'its' (without the apostrophe) is the possessive case, i.e. 'belonging to it':
• "This car has its own built-in air conditioning." 

lunch → launch

led/lead

• This is a confusing one, because 'lead' has two completely different meanings, depending on the pronunciation.
• 'To lead' (pronounced 'leed') is present tense, meaning 'to go in front of' or 'to guide':
• "When the band is in a procession, the Sergeant-Major leads the way." 'lead' (pronounced 'led') is a heavy, soft, grey metal.
• Led is the past tense of the verb 'to lead' described above. Hence:
• "Joe led the way back to the main road."  

learned/learnt

• "Learnt" and "learned" are two acceptable forms of the past simple/past participle of the verb learn, which means exactly the same thing.
• Learn is an irregular verb in the British English where the past tense is spelt with a ‘t’ at the end - [learn/ learnt].
• Conversely, Learn is a regular verb in the American English where the past tense is spelt with a ‘ed’ at the end - [learn / learned].
• Thus, neither is incorrect as “learnt” is more commonly used in the British English, and “learned” in American English.
• I leaned how to lead people → I learned how to lead people

lose/loose

• 'To lose' (pronounced 'looze') is to misplace something:
• "Whenever I'm in a hurry I always seem to lose something." 'To loose' is to free up, or loosen. More often used as an adjective:
• "This belt is too loose." (Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

oversea/overseas

• Overseas means across an ocean (or oceans), in another country
• Oversee means to supervise
• Oversea is not a word

plain/plane

• A 'plain' is a large, flat stretch of land. 'Plain' can also be used as an adjective, as in:
• "Annette was a very pretty girl, but her sister Molly was rather plain." 'Plane' is short for aeroplane (US: airplane) but can also be used for a flat surface or a woodworking tool.

pole/poll

• A 'pole' is basically a long metal or wooden bar, but is also used to describe the North and South Poles, magnetic poles on a magnet, and extremes of opinion.
• "She and her father are poles apart when it comes to politics." 'poll' is only used when it comes to voting, although it is used as a metaphor in other contexts.
• "We conducted a quick poll, and came to the conclusion that option 3 was the most popular." 

principal/principle

• 'principal' is an adjective meaning 'main'. It can also be the head of a school or college.
• "Coffee is the principal export of the country."
• "We had a good discussion with the Principal concerning school discipline." A 'principle' is a basic truth or law which someone holds to:
• "To do something like that would be against his principles." 

'reason because'

• Use 'the reason that' or 'the reason being' (but not 'the reason being is..')

roll/role

1. You can have a 'roll of honour', a 'roll down the hill' or a 'bread roll', but if you are playing a part in any sense, you are acting a 'role'.
2. "All winners will have their names added to the roll."
3. "He was present in his role as Vice-Chairman of the company."

surly → surely

than/then

• 'than' is used when comparing things:
• "It's much quicker than going on the bus." 'then' refers to a sequence of events:
• "First I'm going to have a bath then I'll read the post." 

there/their/they're

• Probably the most common mistake in student work.
• 'their' means 'belonging to them':
• "That's their car, I'm sure." 'they're' is an abbreviation for 'they are':
• "I'm sorry, they're not in at the moment." Any other use is probably 'there', which is used in a number of contexts:
• "There is no point in going on about it."
• "The accident happened just over there."
• "Is there a cafe near here, please?" 

'very unique'

• The 'very' is unnecessary.
• If something is 'unique' there is nothing else like it, so it can't be 'very unique'. (Consider 'extremely mediocre'.)

where/wear/were/we're

• 'where' refers to a place: "Where did I put those keys?" "It all depends where you want to get to."
• 'wear' is about clothes, usually: "I don't have a thing to wear." "This tire (tyre in UK) is definitely showing signs of wear."
• 'were' (pronounced 'wurr') is the plural of 'was': "They were all together in the lounge at the time."
• 'we're' (pronounced 'weer') is short for 'we are': "OK, we're just coming."

whether/weather

• A simple mistake, but very common. 'weather' refers to rain, sun, hail, snow, etc.
• "The weather looks better than it did yesterday." Whether indicates that a particular course of action is dependent on certain factors: "The question is whether she really wants that or not."

whose/who's

• Can be quite tricky. Essentially, 'who's' is short for 'who is', so if you read it as 'who is' in your head and it makes sense, that's the right one.
• "David is the one who's coming with me to the party on Sunday." 'Whose' is to do with possession.
• "Whose car keys are these?" 

OTHERS

• issues arouse → issues arose
• I want to join a manufacture → I want to join a manufacturing company
• I want to work as a management → I want to work as a manager

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Improve your writing: How to avoid Vince's "Dirty Dozen"

To improve your writing, please avoid these twelve common mistakes (Vince's "Dirty Dozen")

1. Subjects and verbs, agree
2. Awkward articles
3. This... what? aka "Clothe the naked this"
4. Include first names
5. Write out numbers under 10
6. When to use passive voice
7. How to eliminate wordiness
8. Avoid unfamiliar abbreviations
9. Cut unnecessary adverbs
10. Delete unnecessary quotation marks
11. Find and fix errors not picked up by speck check
12. Avoid platitudes like, "real world" and "real business"

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1. AGREEMENT

Many ESL writers struggle to keep their subjects and verbs in agreement.

Here are some useful tips from Jane Strauss, author of "The Blue Book of Grammar and Punctuation".

Basic Rule.	The basic rule states that a singular subject takes a singular verb, while a plural subject takes a plural verb. NOTE: The trick is in knowing whether the subject is singular or plural. The next trick is recognizing a singular or plural verb.
	Hint: Verbs do not form their plurals by adding an s as nouns do. In order to determine which verb is singular and which one is plural, think of which verb you would use with he or she and which verb you would use with they.
	Example:	talks, talk Which one is the singular form? Which word would you use with he? We say, "He talks." Therefore, talks is singular. We say, "They talk." Therefore, talk is plural.

Rule 1. Two singular subjects connected by or or nor require a singular verb. Example: My aunt or my uncle is arriving by train today.

Rule 2. Two singular subjects connected by either/or or neither/nor require a singular verb as in Rule 1. Examples: Neither Juan nor Carmen is available. Either Kiana or Casey is helping today with stage decorations.

Rule 3. When I is one of the two subjects connected by either/or or neither/nor, put it second and follow it with the singular verb am. Example: Neither she nor I am going to the festival.

Rule 4. When a singular subject is connected by or or nor to a plural subject, put the plural subject last and use a plural verb. Example: The serving bowl or the plates go on that shelf.

Rule 5. When a singular and plural subject are connected by either/or or neither/nor, put the plural subject last and use a plural verb. Example: Neither Jenny nor the others are available.

Rule 6. As a general rule, use a plural verb with two or more subjects when they are connected by and. Example: A car and a bike are my means of transportation.

Rule 7. Sometimes the subject is separated from the verb by words such as along with, as well as, besides, or not. Ignore these expressions when determining whether to use a singular or plural verb. Examples: The politician, along with the newsmen, is expected shortly. Excitement, as well as nervousness, is the cause of her shaking.

Rule 8. The pronouns each, everyone, every one, everybody, anyone, anybody, someone, and somebody are singular and require singular verbs. Do not be misled by what follows of. Examples: Each of the girls sings well. Every one of the cakes is gone. NOTE: Everyone is one word when it means everybody. Every one is two words when the meaning is each one.

Rule 9. With words that indicate portions—percent, fraction, part, majority, some, all, none, remainder, and so forth —look at the noun in your of phrase (object of the preposition) to determine whether to use a singular or plural verb. If the object of the preposition is singular, use a singular verb. If the object of the preposition is plural, use a plural verb. Examples: Fifty percent of the pie has disappeared. Pie is the object of the preposition of. Fifty percent of the pies have disappeared. Pies is the object of the preposition. One-third of the city is unemployed. One-third of the people are unemployed. NOTE: Hyphenate all spelled-out fractions. All of the pie is gone. All of the pies are gone. Some of the pie is missing. Some of the pies are missing. None of the garbage was picked up. None of the sentences were punctuated correctly. Of all her books, none have sold as well as the first one.

Rule 10. The expression the number is followed by a singular verb while the expression a number is followed by a plural verb. Examples: The number of people we need to hire is thirteen. A number of people have written in about this subject.

Rule 11. When either and neither are subjects, they always take singular verbs. Examples: Neither of them is available to speak right now. Either of us is capable of doing the job.

Rule 12. The words here and there have generally been labeled as adverbs even though they indicate place. In sentences beginning with herethere, the subject follows the verb. or Examples: There are four hurdles to jump. There is a high hurdle to jump.

Rule 13. Use a singular verb with sums of money or periods of time. Examples: Ten dollars is a high price to pay. Five years is the maximum sentence for that offense.

Rule 14. Sometimes the pronoun who, that, or which is the subject of a verb in the middle of the sentence. The pronouns who, that, and which become singular or plural according to the noun directly in front of them. So, if that noun is singular, use a singular verb. If it is plural, use a plural verb. Examples: Salma is the scientist who writes/write the reports. The word in front of who is scientist, which is singular. Therefore, use the singular verb writes. He is one of the men who does/do the work. The word in front of who is men, which is plural. Therefore, use the plural verb do.

Rule 15. Collective nouns such as team and staff may be either singular or plural depending on their use in the sentence. Examples: The staff is in a meeting. Staff is acting as a unit here. The staff are in disagreement about the findings. The staff are acting as separate individuals in this example. The sentence would read even better as: The staff members are in disagreement about the findings.

(found at http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/subjectVerbAgree.asp; accessed 2011/06)

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2. ARTICLES

Even writers who grew up in English-speaking countries struggle with articles. Here are some tips from the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL), which is a fantastic resource.   

Using Articles

Summary: This handout discusses the differences between indefinite articles (a/an) and definite articles (the).

What is an article? Basically, an article is an adjective. Like adjectives, articles modify nouns.

English has two articles: the and a/an. The is used to refer to specific or particular nouns; a/an is used to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns. We call the the definite article and a/an the indefinite article.

the = definite article

a/an = indefinite article

For example, if I say, "Let's read the book," I mean a specific book. If I say, "Let's read a book," I mean any book rather than a specific book.

Here's another way to explain it: The is used to refer to a specific or particular member of a group. For example, "I just saw the most popular movie of the year." There are many movies, but only one particular movie is the most popular. Therefore, we use the.

"A/an" is used to refer to a non-specific or non-particular member of the group. For example, "I would like to go see a movie." Here, we're not talking about a specific movie. We're talking about any movie. There are many movies, and I want to see any movie. I don't have a specific one in mind.

Let's look at each kind of article a little more closely.

Indefinite Articles: a and an

"A" and "an" signal that the noun modified is indefinite, referring to any member of a group. For example:

• "My daughter really wants a dog for Christmas." This refers to any dog. We don't know which dog because we haven't found the dog yet.
• "Somebody call a policeman!" This refers to any policeman. We don't need a specific policeman; we need any policeman who is available.
• "When I was at the zoo, I saw an elephant!" Here, we're talking about a single, non-specific thing, in this case an elephant. There are probably several elephants at the zoo, but there's only one we're talking about here.

Remember, using a or an depends on the sound that begins the next word. So...

• a + singular noun beginning with a consonant: a boy; a car; a bike; a zoo; a dog
• an + singular noun beginning with a vowel: an elephant; an egg; an apple; an idiot; an orphan
• a + singular noun beginning with a consonant sound: a user (sounds like 'yoo-zer,' i.e. begins with a consonant 'y' sound, so 'a' is used); a university; a unicycle
• an + nouns starting with silent "h": an hour
• a + nouns starting with a pronounced "h": a horse
  • In some cases where "h" is pronounced, such as "historical," you can use an. However, a is more commonly used and preferred.
    A historical event is worth recording.

Remember that these rules also apply when you use acronyms:

Introductory Composition at Purdue (ICaP) handles first-year writing at the University. Therefore, an ICaP memo generally discusses issues concerning English 106 instructors.

Another case where this rule applies is when acronyms start with consonant letters but have vowel sounds:

An MSDS (material safety data sheet) was used to record the data. An SPCC plan (Spill Prevention Control and Countermeasures plan) will help us prepare for the worst.

If the noun is modified by an adjective, the choice between a and an depends on the initial sound of the adjective that immediately follows the article:

• a broken egg
• an unusual problem
• a European country (sounds like 'yer-o-pi-an,' i.e. begins with consonant 'y' sound)

Remember, too, that in English, the indefinite articles are used to indicate membership in a group:

• I am a teacher. (I am a member of a large group known as teachers.)
• Brian is an Irishman. (Brian is a member of the people known as Irish.)
• Seiko is a practicing Buddhist. (Seiko is a member of the group of people known as Buddhists.)

Definite Article: the

The definite article is used before singular and plural nouns when the noun is specific or particular. The signals that the noun is definite, that it refers to a particular member of a group. For example:

"The dog that bit me ran away." Here, we're talking about a specific dog, the dog that bit me.

"I was happy to see the policeman who saved my cat!" Here, we're talking about a particular policeman. Even if we don't know the policeman's name, it's still a particular policeman because it is the one who saved the cat.

"I saw the elephant at the zoo." Here, we're talking about a specific noun. Probably there is only one elephant at the zoo.

Count and Noncount Nouns

The can be used with noncount nouns, or the article can be omitted entirely.

• "I love to sail over the water" (some specific body of water) or "I love to sail over water" (any water).
• "He spilled the milk all over the floor" (some specific milk, perhaps the milk you bought earlier that day) or "He spilled milk all over the floor" (any milk).

"A/an" can be used only with count nouns.

• "I need a bottle of water."
• "I need a new glass of milk."

Most of the time, you can't say, "She wants a water," unless you're implying, say, a bottle of water.

Geographical use of the

There are some specific rules for using the with geographical nouns.

Do not use the before:

• names of most countries/territories: Italy, Mexico, Bolivia; however, thethe Dominican Republic, the Philippines, the United States Netherlands,
• names of cities, towns, or states: Seoul, Manitoba, Miami
• names of streets: Washington Blvd., Main St.
• names of lakes and bays: Lake Titicaca, Lake Erie except with a group of lakes like the Great Lakes
• names of mountains: Mount Everest, Mount Fuji except with ranges of mountains like the Andes or the Rockies or unusual names like the Matterhorn
• names of continents (Asia, Europe)
• names of islands (Easter Island, Maui, Key West) except with island chains like the Aleutians, the Hebrides, or the Canary Islands

Do use the before:

• names of rivers, oceans and seas: the Nile, the Pacific
• points on the globe: the Equator, the North Pole
• geographical areas: the Middle East, the West
• deserts, forests, gulfs, and peninsulas: the Sahara, the Persian Gulf, the Black Forest, the Iberian Peninsula

Omission of Articles

Some common types of nouns that don't take an article are:

• Names of languages and nationalities: Chinese, English, Spanish, Russian (unless you are referring to the population of the nation: "The Spanish are known for their warm hospitality.")
• Names of sports: volleyball, hockey, baseball
• Names of academic subjects: mathematics, biology, history, computer science

(found at http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/540/01; accessed 2011/06)

Contributors: Paul Lynch, Allen Brizee, Elizabeth Angeli Last Edited: 2011-03-03 10:04:28

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3. THIS... WHAT?

To quote Professor John Cochrane at The University of Chicago Booth School of Business, you should clothe the naked “this.”

• “This” should always have something following it. “This example shows that....” is fine.
• More generally, this rule helps you to avoid an unclear antecedent to the “this.”
• Often there are three or more things in recent memory that “this” could point to.

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4. Include first and last names

Always refer to current students or alumni by their full name. Some readers only know someone's first name.

Q: HOW DO I WRITE NAMES IN MY ESSAYS?

IN ESSAYS (Why School X)

• Student names: Always refer to current students or alumni by their full name. Sometimes, adcom readers only know someone's first name, especially at "wet" schools like Kellogg and Tuck.

• School name: similarly, in your goals essay, the first time you write a school's name, spell it out officially as the school does e.g. The Kellogg School of Management. Afterward, you can just call it Kellogg.

IN LETTERS of RECOMMENDATION

The first time your recommender mentions you, he should write your full name, like this: "I first met Mr. Vince Ricci in 2002." Afterward, he can refer to you as just Mr. Ricci (or Vince if a peer / casual recommender)

• I am writing to you with regard to [Mr./Ms. Full Name], who has requested that I write a letter of recommendation on [his/her] behalf.

Mr vs Mr.

• In British English, abbreviated titles that end with the same letter as the word being abbreviated do not take a full stop (period): “Mr” but “Prof.”
• On the other hand, in American English, all titles take a period: “Mr.” and “Prof.”
• Either way, be sure to add a space after Mr or Mr.
  • Too many clients write Mr.Smith, which is always incorrect in US or UK English.

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5. HOW TO WRITE NUMBERS

In essays (and recommendation letters), numbers under ten should be written out. If there are numbers in the text, it is preferable to spell them out if they are less than 9 but use numerals if they are greater than nine, for example, “nine” and not “9,” but “87” and not “eighty seven.”

Use numbers (numerals) in these instances:

1. For all numbers 10 and above: "There were 17 students in class."

2. All numbers below 10 that are grouped in comparison to numbers 10 and above: "Only 5 of 17 students passed the course."

3. When using numbers immediately before a unit of measure: "a 5-minute wait"

4. Numbers that represent statistical or mathematical functions or formulas: "a ratio of 12:1"

5. Numbers that represent time, dates, ages, sizes, scores, money, and points on a scale: "It happened 5 years ago"; "a roomful of 6-year-olds"; "$40."

6. Numbers that represent a place in a series: "week 7 of an 8-week diet"

7. In a list of four or more numbers: "We had 1, 2, 5, and 8 pieces, respectively"

For more information, you may wish to check the APA manual http://www.docstyles.com/apacrib.htm#Sec40

VINCE NOTE:

• THESE RULES DO NOT APPLY TO RESUMES, CVs AND APPLICATION DATA FORM SHORT ANSWER QUESTIONS.
• IN THOSE CASES, YOU SHOULD CONSERVE SPACE BY USING NUMERALS (1, 2, 10, 20, etc.) EVERY TIME

Writing Numbers One through Ten

Spell out numbers one through ten, as in this example:

• My little brother ate four apples before dinner and became ill.
• Why do parents always check to see if babies have ten toes?

Writing Numbers Above Ten Spell out numbers above ten, unless writing the number would involve using more than two words. For example:

• I have sixty-three dead bugs in my collection.
• My cousin has 207 bugs in his. (That would be three words, not counting "and.")
• This site has given me a thousand helpful hints for my homework.
• My grandmother is seventy-two today.
• My little sister had about 4,763 measles on her face. (That would be four words.)

Always spell out numbers that begin sentences:

• Four hundred and fifty people attended the birthday party.

However, you should try to avoid using long, clunky numbers at the beginning of a sentence:

• There were 450 people at the party.

Dates, phone numbers, and time: Use numbers for dates:

• My birthday is March 16.
• He was born on Valentines Day, 1975.

And use numbers for phone numbers:

• The phone number for the school is 800-555-6262
• The international code for England is 44.

And use numbers for time if using a.m. or p.m.:

• The alarm will sound at 7 p.m.
• I make my bed at 7 a.m. each morning.

But spell out times when using "o'clock" or when the a.m. or p.m. are omitted:

• The alarm will sound at seven o'clock.
• I make my bed at seven each morning.

More tips here: 10 Rules for Writing Numbers and Numerals http://www.dailywritingtips.com/10-rules-for-writing-numbers-and-numerals/

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6. PASSIVE VOICE

Passive voice is used frequently in technical writing, where the focus is usually on what was done rather than who did it. It is conventionally used to report experimental procedures and to avoid constant repetition of I or we throughout the report, paper, or thesis.

In order to use passive voice correctly, it is necessary to fully understand, and be able to recognize, the difference between passive and active voice.

(found at http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/passive/index.xml; accessed 2011/06) 

Active and passive voice

The active voice names an 'actor' which/who is the subject of the verb; the actor does the verb.

Who/What does the verb? If the answer is clear, the sentence is active. Note that often, there is a direct object (DO) 'receiving' the action.

Part of speech	Subject	Verb
Sentence	The students	tested	the samples.
	The samples	failed.

Who/What is the verb done to? This is the direct object.

Part of speech	Subject	Verb	Direct Object
Sentence	The students	tested	the samples.

Where possible, use the active voice. It is direct, brief, and easy to understand.

The passive voice places the emphasis on the action rather than the actor. The direct object is placed before the verb, which is given in the passive form. The subject, or actor, is usually not mentioned.

Example: The samples were tested.

Formation of the passive

The passive can use any tense of the verb to be + a past participle

Subject	Any tense of the verb to be +	A past participle
The load/s	is/are was/were	calculated.
The report/s	has been have been	presented.
The sample/s	will be can be	tested.
The result/s	is/are being (should) have been (could) have been	compared

(found at http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/passive/1.0.xml; accessed 2011/06)

Reasons for using the passive

                         

1. The 'actor' is not known.

• Oil was discovered off the coast of Australia.
• The number of Internet users was estimated to be over one million.

2. The 'actor' is not important.

• The report has been published.
• The results will be presented at the conference.

3. It is considered desirable to conceal the identity of the 'actor'.

• The results are invalid, as the correct testing procedure was not followed.          
• Research funding will be cut next year.

4. An impersonal tone is needed for academic writing.

• In this report, the stress fields in a C-shape plate will be analyzed.

An impersonal tone is also used for process descriptions.

• First, the raw materials are loaded into a container ...

5. A tactful tone is needed to smooth over an error or difficulty.

Compare these two examples.

• Example of passive voice: The samples were not checked at the second stage . . .
• Example of active voice: We forgot to check the samples . . .

(found at  http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/passive/1.1.xml; accessed 2011/06)

Changing active to passive

Example of active voice

Part of speech	Subject	Verb	Object
Sentence	The group	will present	the report	next week.

STEP 1: move the object to the subject position

• The report ...

STEP 2: change the verb to the passive, making sure that BE takes the same tense as the verb in the active sentence

• The report will be presented ...

STEP 3: drop the subject

• Example of passive voice without the subject: The report will be presented next week.

or move it to a position after the verb

• Example of passive voice with the subject: The report will be presented by the group next week.

(found at http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/passive/2.xml; accessed 2011/06)

Verbs that can't be used in the passive

Most verbs can be changed from the active to the passive.

Active voice: We tested the samples. > Passive voice: The samples were tested.

If the verb can be followed by a direct object (a direct object answers the question who or what after the verb) it can be made passive.

Part of speech		Verb	Direct object
Sentence	These difficulties	may delay	the completion of the project.

But the verb occur, for example, cannot take a direct object.

Part of speech		Verb	Indirect object
Sentence	A solution	occurred	to him.

This cannot be transformed to the passive since there is no direct object to become the subject.

Some verbs that can be used only in the active are: occur, rise, happen, arise, fall, exist, consist (of), depend (on),  result (from).

Active and passive verbs

Active (correct)		Passive (incorrect)
Problems may	occur happen arise exist	Problems may be	occurred happened arisen existed
They	consist of depend on	They are	consist of depend on

Note: 'They are dependent on . . .' is correct since 'dependent' is an adjective.

A special case:

Part of speech	Subject	Verb	Object
Sentence	They	lack	resources.

Lack can take a direct object but cannot be transformed to the passive: Resources are lacked (incorrect). However, you could write: Resources are lacking.

Concern and involve

Concerned about means 'worried about'.  Concerned with means 'involved in'. The passive voice can be used with both meanings. Whether or not they can be used in the passive depends on the meaning.

To involve has three meanings:

1. To participate, to take part
2. To include
3. To require

Only the first meaning, to participate, to take part can be used in the passive form.

• This week, students are involved in lab work.

The active voice must be used with the second meaning, to include.

• Example: He often involves his students in his research.

The active voice must also be used with the third meaning, to require.

• Example: The project involves buying new software.

(found at http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/grammar/engineering/passive/3.xml; accessed 2011/06)

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7. WORDINESS

Never use two words if one is enough.

Instead of "past experience," simply write "experience."

The verb "resigned" is a concise alternative for the phrase "left the firm".

• end result → result
• future plans → plans
• past experience → experience

If a sentence has more than 20 words without punctuation, or more than 40 words altogether, it may be excessively wordy. Consider re-phrasing the sentence, or breaking it into smaller sentences. People have very short attention spans; if too much information is presented all at once, the brain cannot properly process it.

While there are no strict rules about length of a sentence, if your clauses are longer than about 20 words, or if your entire sentence is longer than about 40 words, it may be too much for your reader to clearly understand. If the reader has to go back and re-read too many sentences, they may just give up reading... and possibly fall asleep.

S-V-O is the way to go!

Subject - Verb - Object (S-V-O) Sentences

1. I play football.
2. Max reads books.
3. We can speak English.
4. Sue is singing a nice song.
5. I like table tennis.

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/en/grammar/satzstellung_1.htm

more tips here:

http://www.delicious.com/admissions/grammar

ALSO, WATCH FOR RUN-ON SENTENCES

When two independent clauses are joined by a co-ordinating conjunction (e.g. "and", "but", "or", "so"), there must be a comma before the conjunction or it will be a run-on sentence. Clearly identify the conjunction in the sentence with two independent clauses, and insert a comma before the conjunction.

Incorrect: Matthew went to the library and I headed back to the science lab.
The two clauses, “Matthew went to the library” and “I headed back to the science lab”, are independent; a comma should be inserted before “and”.

Incorrect: The wind was brisk but the sun was strong.
The two clauses, “the wind was brisk” and “the sun was strong”, are independent; there should be a comma before “but”.

Correct: The man’s business was failing, so he was searching for alternative income.
The two clauses, “the man’s business was failing” and “he was searching for alternative income”, are independent. The co-ordinating conjunction, “so” requires a comma before it.

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8. UNFAMILIAR ABBREVIATIONS

Q: HOW AND WHEN DO I USE ABBREVIATED WORDS?

A: Typically, an abbreviation is spelled out at its first instance in an article, followed by the abbreviated form within parentheses; in subsequent instances, only the abbreviation is used. However, this is not compulsory for terms that may be familiar to the intended readers.

For example,

INCORRECT

• "I work as an engineer for NTT. NTT is Japan's leading telecommunications company."

CORRECT

• "I work as an engineer for Nippon Telegraph & Telephone Corporation (NTT). NTT is Japan's leading telecommunications company."

CORRECT

• "As my long-term goal, I plan to become CEO of my company." (CEO is a well-known, universal acronym, so you do not need to spell it out the first time)

Q: SHOULD I USE ACRONYMS IN ADMISSIONS ESSAYS?

A: Please try to avoid acronyms. 

While they are effective in technical reports and internal communications for fellow practitioners, they have no place in MBA admissions essays. 

Instead, use this opportunity to prove your ability to explain complex, technical information in a way that readers (and future MBA classmates) can understand.

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9. UNNECESSARY ADVERBS

When cutting words to fit word limits, try removing adverbs. They add little value. In the following examples, you can see that removing the adverb does not affect change the meaning of the sentence. Instead, use those precious words to show your fit with a particular school.

Example #1

"I strongly feel the need to broaden my business perspective."

vs.

""I feel the need to broaden my business perspective."

vs.

""I need to broaden my business perspective."

Example #2

I see the following phrase far too often:

"I strongly believe that your MBA program is the best one for me."

Belief is not an action. One cannot "sort of" believe something. You either believe it or you do not.
Just write, "I am convinced that School X best prepares me to realize my goals for three reasons. First, ..."


SPLIT INFINITIVES
Avoid adding modifiers between the infinitive ("to" and "verb"). The following phrases can be shorter. Again, save space for new ideas that add value.

• to further improve
  
  • to improve
• to fully understand
  
  • to understand
• to directly share
  
  • to share
• to effectively implement
  
  • to implement
• to actually realize
  
  • to realize

(read more about split infinitives here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Split_infinitive)

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10. UNNECESSARY QUOTATION MARKS

Q: HOW DO I WRITE CLUB AND CLASS NAMES?

A: WRITE AS A PROPER NOUN, FOLLOWING STANDARD CAPITALIZATION RULES. YOU DO NOT NEED TO USE QUOTATION MARKS.

INCORRECT

I would like to take Professor William Duggan's "Napoleon's Glance" course.

CORRECT

I would like to take Professor William Duggan's Napoleon's Glance course.

INCORRECT

Since I enjoy teaching and direct service activities, I plan to increase international students’ participation in community volunteering activities like “International Student Advisory Board” and “Community Action Rewards Everyone (CARE)”.

CORRECT

Since I enjoy teaching and direct service activities, I plan to increase international students’ participation in community volunteering activities like International Student Advisory Board and Community Action Rewards Everyone (CARE).

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11. ERRORS NOT PICKED UP BY SPELL CHECKERS 

Common spelling and grammar errors (not picked up by spell checkers)

There are many errors that are not detectable by spellcheckers. There are words which, though misspelt, are actually correct spellings for the wrong word: "I go to work on Monday threw to Friday."

The list below shows a number of common errors. It's worth a quick read-through to ensure that you have not made any of these mistakes. If you are doubtful about a particular word or phrase in your essay, use the 'Find in page' option on your browser to see if it appears here.

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

The following words are spelled correctly, but they are incorrectly used in most essays. Spell check will not catch them. Therefore, you need to read your essays aloud. If you want to be extra sure, record yourself reading your essays, then listen for awkawd phrases and wordy passages. 

• affect/effect
  
  • In most cases, 'affect' is the verb and 'effect' the noun.
  • "If I don't complete my assignment, it could affect my degree mark."
  • "I banged the door as hard as I could, but it had no effect."
  • However, 'effect' can be used as a verb in certain cases, meaning 'to bring to pass': "I wanted to talk to her to effect a reconciliation."
  • (Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

• boarder
  
  • use "border" when discussing boundaries and edges, as in Doctors Without Borders, border guard, and cross-border M&A 
  • "boarders" refers to residents in a boarding house or school paying for their room and board (food), or people who ride snowboards
  • A 'boarder' is someone who 'boards' - a lodger. A 'border' is a barrier surrounding an area; either a fence or sometimes simply a notional line, as in borders between countries. It is also used in computers to indicate the edge of an object - the borders of a page, for instance. (Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)
• carrier
  
  • you mean "career"; a "carrier" refers to a person or thing that carries, holds, or conveys something

• criteria/criterion

'criterion' is the singular, 'criteria' the plural.

"He seems to have met all the criteria."

"We must look closely at this criterion."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

hole/whole

A 'hole' is something you get in your sock (or roof, or whatever).

'Whole' means a complete entity, rather than just a part:

"The shoes looked good, but it was a different matter if you considered the whole outfit."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

its/it's

'it's' (with the apostrophe) is always short for 'it is':

"It's a good job we didn't go out in this weather."

'its' (without the apostrophe) is the possessive case, i.e. 'belonging to it':

"This car has its own built-in air conditioning."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

led/lead

This is a confusing one, because 'lead' has two completely different meanings, depending on the pronunciation.

'To lead' (pronounced 'leed') is present tense, meaning 'to go in front of' or 'to guide':

"When the band is in a procession, the Sergeant-Major leads the way."

'lead' (pronounced 'led') is a heavy, soft, grey metal.

Led is the past tense of the verb 'to lead' described above. Hence:

"Joe led the way back to the main road."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

learned/learnt

"Learnt" and "learned" are two acceptable forms of the past simple/past participle of the verb learn, which means exactly the same thing. 

Learn is an irregular verb in the British English where the past tense is spelt with a ‘t’ at the end - [learn/ learnt]. 

Conversely, Learn is a regular verb in the American English where the past tense is spelt with a ‘ed’ at the end - [learn / learned]. 

Thus, neither is incorrect as “learnt” is more commonly used in the British English, and “learned” in American English.

lose/loose

'To lose' (pronounced 'looze') is to misplace something:

"Whenever I'm in a hurry I always seem to lose something."

'To loose' is to free up, or loosen. More often used as an adjective:

"This belt is too loose."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

• managements
  
  • use the singular "management" to refer to the executives of your company; "Management decided to sponsor my MBA studies." "At first, management disagreed with my proposal."

oversea/overseas

Overseas means across an ocean (or oceans), in another country

Oversee means to supervise

Oversea is not a word

plain/plane

A 'plain' is a large, flat stretch of land. 'Plain' can also be used as an adjective, as in:

"Annette was a very pretty girl, but her sister Molly was rather plain."

'Plane' is short for aeroplane (US: airplane) but can also be used for a flat surface or a woodworking tool.

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

pole/poll

A 'pole' is basically a long metal or wooden bar, but is also used to describe the North and South Poles, magnetic poles on a magnet, and extremes of opinion.

"She and her father are poles apart when it comes to politics."

'poll' is only used when it comes to voting, although it is used as a metaphor in other contexts.

"We conducted a quick poll, and came to the conclusion that option 3 was the most popular."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

principal/principle

'principal' is an adjective meaning 'main'. It can also be the head of a school or college.

"Coffee is the principal export of the country."

"We had a good discussion with the Principal concerning school discipline."

A 'principle' is a basic truth or law which someone holds to:

"To do something like that would be against his principles."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

'reason because'

Use 'the reason that' or 'the reason being' (but not 'the reason being is..')

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

roll/role

You can have a 'roll of honour', a 'roll down the hill' or a 'bread roll', but if you are playing a part in any sense, you are acting a 'role'.

"All winners will have their names added to the roll."

"He was present in his role as Vice-Chairman of the company."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

• staffs
  
  • write "staff"; like "fish", staff can refer to more than one; "Our staff includes professionals from three different countries." "The entire staff appreciated my effort."

than/then

'than' is used when comparing things:

"It's much quicker than going on the bus."

'then' refers to a sequence of events:

"First I'm going to have a bath then I'll read the post."

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

there/their/they're

Probably the most common mistake in student work.

'their' means 'belonging to them':

"That's their car, I'm sure."

'they're' is an abbreviation for 'they are':

"I'm sorry, they're not in at the moment."

Any other use is probably 'there', which is used in a number of contexts:

"There is no point in going on about it."

"The accident happened just over there."

"Is there a cafe near here, please?"

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

'very unique'

The 'very' is unnecessary. If something is 'unique' there is nothing else like it, so it can't be 'very unique'. (Consider 'extremely mediocre'.)

(Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

• where/wear/were/we're
  
  • 'where' refers to a place: "Where did I put those keys?" "It all depends where you want to get to."
  • 'wear' is about clothes, usually: "I don't have a thing to wear." "This tire (tyre in UK) is definitely showing signs of wear."
  • 'were' (pronounced 'wurr') is the plural of 'was': "They were all together in the lounge at the time."
  • 'we're' (pronounced 'weer') is short for 'we are': "OK, we're just coming."
  • (Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)
    
• whether/weather
  
  • A simple mistake, but very common. 'weather' refers to rain, sun, hail, snow, etc.
  • "The weather looks better than it did yesterday."
  • Whether indicates that a particular course of action is dependent on certain factors: "The question is whether she really wants that or not."
  • (Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

• whose/who's
  
  • Can be quite tricky. Essentially, 'who's' is short for 'who is', so if you read it as 'who is' in your head and it makes sense, that's the right one.
  • "David is the one who's coming with me to the party on Sunday."
  • 'Whose' is to do with possession.
  • "Whose car keys are these?"
  • (Thanks to Alan Rolfe at The School of Art, Design and Media, University of West London: found at http://mercury.tvu.ac.uk/~alan/grammar/howlers.html; accessed 2012/03)

More hints here ▸ http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/errors.html#errors

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12. FANTASY LAND

Some clients write phrases like, "Before getting into the real world, I would like to ..."

What is the "real world"?

If you are working a full-time job, you already LIVE in the real world. 

Graduate school is not Disneyland.

You mean, "Before starting my next career phase..."

"I need an MBA to prepare me for the real business world."
Again, if you are working now, you are already in the real business world.

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