Never write something that someone else could write.
Too often, clients in their essays with something like, This will allow me to achieve my long-term goal.
Why do you even assume that the reader remembers your long-term goal? That was pages ago :) Seriously, use every single opportunity to remind busy readers of what you are trying to achieve and why you care about it.
Like all humans, admissions office readers learn through repetition. Learn how to say the same thing in a different way. Paraphrase your specific goals. Never use a generic phrase like "my short-term goal" or "my long-term goal." Just because that phrase appears in the question you don't need to repeat it in your essay. You have specific goals. Remind them what your specific goals are at every opportunity.
A few years ago, I was invited to give a few technical writing lectures at The University of Tokyo. Now, I am happy to share these notes and tips with you in case they help you achieve your writing goals. Many thanks to the writing centers that allowed me to share their sage advice with you in this forum.
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